Back to the shoreline, you stroked
with reverent fingers, weathered
wet and cold between the eyes
My sisters came and picked my bones
Caused salty scratches to the skin
A public nakedness for all to see
Soon forgotten as the earth passed
Back to the shoreline, you stroked
with reverent fingers, weathered
wet and cold between the eyes
My sisters came and picked my bones
Caused salty scratches to the skin
A public nakedness for all to see
Soon forgotten as the earth passed
Lovely piece – a real spareness to it.
Thanks, Jan. One of those where I was trying to get the piece down to its simplest form. I appreciate your kind words.
That’s the stark and sad reality of the illusion called life. Love the way its written. 🙂
Thank you Terveen. That is most kind and I am glad you enjoyed the poem.